I had a very fun vacation because I dance a lot and eat a lot
-I to drink a bear and buchanas
-I meet new persons and place beatiful
-I go to visit my family
-the days 24th to share in my house together the family I love the crismathes
-I eating sopa and fish
-I had a very crazy vacation because to work
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ResponderEliminarBe very careful with your verbs. What time are you talking about? Well, if you are talking about the past you need to make sure that your verbs reflect this.
ResponderEliminarFor example,
"I had a very fun vacation because I dance a lot and eat a lot."
There are a couple of verbs not in the correct tense.
The verbs dance and eat should be DANCED and ATE, respectively.
Check the rest of your entry for mistakes with verb tense! Good luck and let me know how it goes!